Jack The Pumpkin King Is Tired of Hallowing
By Draven Morehead
Jack The Pumpkin King is tired of being the King of Hallowing and wants something different. He walks into a forest and keeps walking while he’s asleep and fids something new and finds a whole bunch of doors. He is interested in all of them and likes them but one really catches his empty eye socket.
He walks in through it and it was shaped like a Christmas tree the others were shaped like the other holidays. He falls in and he lands in something new like he wanted. There’s snow and colors and everything Christmas would have.
He really likes it and he finds it’s name Christmas town like his town is Hallowing town. He really wants it so he shows it to the citizens of hallowing town by giving them a presentation on Christmas. He doesn’t call Santa Santa Claus but Sandy Claws instead.
He tries to make Christmas and kidnaps Santa and gives him a break. The kidnapers tae him to Oggie Boogie the second meanest monster in town. Oggie was going to kill Him but Sally a doll stalls him.
I won’t tell you f it ends well or if Christmas is a total fail. I think that the movie is very good but for per say a 1 year old it would not be a good movie for it.
The first line really hooked my in. I would ask someone to proofread your story next time because there are a few grammar mistakes. YOu could also include some of the actor names and some background information about some of the other characters. I like how you worded your recommendation at the end.
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